tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.comments2020-03-19T21:40:51.795-07:00The Nightwatchman-M.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03471005813303650513noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-53326662323582071522020-03-19T21:40:51.795-07:002020-03-19T21:40:51.795-07:00Spell to fix your broken marriage or relationship ...Spell to fix your broken marriage or relationship problem or after a divorce or Breakup,I was recently scam by two of them, until one faithful day i meet a man called Dr Oselumen who help me to get back to the father of my kid after we have been separated for two years,I only pay for the items required for the spell and he cast the spell for me within 24hours my ex husband called me and beg me to forgive him for everything until the end of the world he will never leave me again we are back together.if you need a real and quick love spell or you are passing through pregnancy problem Dr Oselumen is the answer, Please if any body needs. LOVE SPELL,LOTTERY,PREGNANCY SPELL, DIVORCE SPELL,STOP COURT CASE AND WIN ANY COURT PROBLEM,DEATH SPELL,BUSINESS SPELL AND MANY MORE YOU MAY NEED. Email him now for your own help. via email droselumen@gmail.com add him on whatsapp line or call +2348054265852.Rebecca Ellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17858086997711126733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-5943590367905658992010-03-06T14:07:07.372-08:002010-03-06T14:07:07.372-08:00Love it. (knew most of it, though)Love it. (knew most of it, though)k4ns4shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03749281420922736610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-17664143854137224962009-08-27T17:21:56.146-07:002009-08-27T17:21:56.146-07:00I really enjoyed this story. You have an eye for t...I really enjoyed this story. You have an eye for the kind of details that make characters real and unique, as well as a bead on the anxieties, desires, and disappointments that attend everyday life. You're well on your way to becoming a fine working-class storyteller.<br /><br />I might be wrong here, but I feel like you're still in want of the right voice or style (if those are the right terms) for the story you want to tell. That's a vague criticism, I know, and you might not be looking for any kind of writerly signature or anything like that, but that's what I think.<br /><br />Anyway, keep up the good work.rmangumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12531469040797576243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-32680869947173524472009-05-30T14:53:03.182-07:002009-05-30T14:53:03.182-07:00Thank you. This is a grittier chapter. A lot of no...Thank you. This is a grittier chapter. A lot of nods to Ellroy here.-M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03471005813303650513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-25408293376354900992009-05-26T19:19:51.618-07:002009-05-26T19:19:51.618-07:00Nice energy here. I especially love the supernatur...Nice energy here. I especially love the supernatural element you're throwing in with the whole box-thing. <br /><br />Also, the bit about the girls turning tricks for blow and occasional black eyes is so fucking gritty. Nice work!Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01878611661648083842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-10078524212001622162009-04-24T08:31:00.000-07:002009-04-24T08:31:00.000-07:00Fucking brilliant work with the shark tank descrip...Fucking brilliant work with the shark tank description. It certainly hints that our guy's journey is going to be a little more ominous than just a cheating-case. Keep the momentum going.Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01878611661648083842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-49212840644266741472009-04-23T00:47:00.000-07:002009-04-23T00:47:00.000-07:00Well, unfortunately the movie has eclipsed the son...Well, unfortunately the movie has eclipsed the song.rmangumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12531469040797576243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-3821684352217569312009-04-20T18:59:00.000-07:002009-04-20T18:59:00.000-07:00Leave it to you to bring up the damn Marilyn Chamb...Leave it to you to bring up the damn Marilyn Chambers movie (God rest her soul). The only reservation I had about the name is that enough people will have heard of Behind the Green Door to turn the title into a joke.-M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03471005813303650513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-3765836697111927202009-04-20T11:29:00.000-07:002009-04-20T11:29:00.000-07:00I love your place names, "King Herrod's", "The Sha...I love your place names, "King Herrod's", "The Shark Tank". I dig the new title as well. It reminds me of the classic 50's song "The Green Door" (which inspired the title of the early-seventies Marylin Chambers porno flick "Behind the Green Door") about a singer who wants to get into a mysterious club that has a green door. I only know the version by the Cramps, but it's been covered a lot. The refrain goes:<br /><br />"Midnight, one more night without sleepin',<br />Watchin' till the morning comes creepin',<br />Green door, what's that secret you're keepin'?"rmangumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12531469040797576243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-65225682860753026952009-04-04T20:00:00.000-07:002009-04-04T20:00:00.000-07:00Haven't yet read Chapt. 2 but if you need help...Haven't yet read Chapt. 2 but if you need help formatting, just copy this and paste before each new paragraph/line of dialogue: <BR/><BR/>Apparently, those are the code for spaces, so it's like hitting the "tab" button. <BR/><BR/>Just saying, but I don't want to cramp your style.Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01878611661648083842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-19783353621084866262009-04-02T14:47:00.000-07:002009-04-02T14:47:00.000-07:00I'm glad you're back. I love your writing style!I'm glad you're back. I love your writing style!Suedleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16509605298277697512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-60462247769615185662009-03-31T11:28:00.000-07:002009-03-31T11:28:00.000-07:00The book has no title. I'm not even sure what the ...The book has no title. I'm not even sure what the story is about to be honest with you. I'm always taking suggestions.-M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03471005813303650513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-79019308081213407182009-03-29T20:20:00.000-07:002009-03-29T20:20:00.000-07:00This is really great, pitch-perfect stuff. I can't...This is really great, pitch-perfect stuff. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Have you thought of a title yet?rmangumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12531469040797576243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-56272133517857730352009-03-28T14:58:00.000-07:002009-03-28T14:58:00.000-07:00I remember reading a piece you did a long time ago...I remember reading a piece you did a long time ago in one of our fiction classes that had a similar, detective tone, which you do very, very well. I'm starting to think this is how your internal monologue goes in everyday life.Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01878611661648083842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-65298422453628409472009-03-22T16:07:00.000-07:002009-03-22T16:07:00.000-07:00very nice, definately keep adding more.very nice, definately keep adding more.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10603984520192853617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-76502470455743283222008-11-10T13:34:00.000-08:002008-11-10T13:34:00.000-08:00I was discussing TCM with somebody who hadn't seen...I was discussing TCM with somebody who hadn't seen it and I was having trouble pinpointing the reason it's so terrifying. <BR/><BR/>Sure, the content is fucked up, but in no way is it novel. And by today's desensitized standards, we've seen far worse. <BR/><BR/>Nor is it gory; contrary to what the name implies, most of the violence is only implied. I mean, I don't think we see any blood during the actual murders. Considering he uses meat hooks and chainsaws, they remain pretty tame. <BR/><BR/>I came to the conclusion that it's the actual way the movie's filmed. Yeah, it's gritty, but that's not even it. It's like they somehow managed to turn subliminal messages into something tangible. It's a little hard to explain, but it looks like the movie is made up of rehearsal footage, where none of the actors had an idea what was going on, which gives it a hyperreal quality. It almost feels like it's always on the verge of collapsing on itself (perhaps a little like Apocalypse Now), but it's very upsetting to a casual viewer. Even horror viewers who are used to polished, ultra-violent movies of today become disturbed (it has that effect on me).Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01878611661648083842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-83517155792557657842008-10-26T21:30:00.000-07:002008-10-26T21:30:00.000-07:00Oh, yeah, and don't forget twitter...Oh, yeah, and don't forget <A HREF="http://www.twitter.com/cheshster" REL="nofollow">twitter...</A>cheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00039481558237999619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-59895721776993716832008-10-26T13:16:00.000-07:002008-10-26T13:16:00.000-07:00It's clear that Friedman, like most of our quasi-s...It's clear that Friedman, like most of our quasi-socialist public intellectuals, knows little and cares less about the role of the price system in efficiently allocating resources, especially "natural" resources. He sees in prices only a potential tool for social engineering. It's true that people will probably use more gas if the price goes down. In economic terms, gas is an "elastic" product, meaning people's buying habits are highly sensitive to changes in price. But this is actually not the worst problem as far as pollution goes. A greater problem for the environment than cheap gas can be categorized as "road socialism". There is no price system in place either for constructing or using the roads. I pay the same taxes whether I choose to drive only to work, choose to walk or bike instead of driving at all, or if I happen to like dragging main blasting metallica all day. There is no incentive for anyone to economize on this resource, a problem known as "the tragedy of the commons". The only thing making this particular commons less tragic is the associated products (gas, cars, etc.) which are not socialized and have operating price systems. But they won't if the Thomas Friedmans of the world get the King's ear. <BR/><BR/>Socialism is bad for the environment, as the industrial cesspool of former Soviet-bloc countries in east Europe attest to.<BR/><BR/>Capitalism not only tastes good, it's good for you!rmangumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12531469040797576243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-60249143034780542062008-10-23T07:34:00.000-07:002008-10-23T07:34:00.000-07:00You end up in the soup, like so.You end up in the soup, <A HREF="http://chesh.soup.io" REL="nofollow">like so</A>.cheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00039481558237999619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-50257462669189467782008-10-23T07:30:00.000-07:002008-10-23T07:30:00.000-07:00I'd suggest that if states oppose nuclear power, t...I'd suggest that if states oppose nuclear power, they need to suck it up and realize that fears that were justifiable 20 years ago aren't so much now, thanks to -gasp- the technology having advanced over the last 20 years to prevent any more disasters!cheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00039481558237999619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-81313528565189930562008-10-22T20:36:00.000-07:002008-10-22T20:36:00.000-07:00Good sir, describe to me the latter stages of this...Good sir, describe to me the latter stages of this terrible, terrible affliction.-M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03471005813303650513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-68469763519430564482008-10-22T17:47:00.000-07:002008-10-22T17:47:00.000-07:00Your descent into the seedy underworld of the inte...Your descent into the seedy underworld of the internet is only just beginning.cheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00039481558237999619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097310771793395260.post-36201794839419075802008-10-21T22:30:00.000-07:002008-10-21T22:30:00.000-07:00Bravo.Bravo.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com